Humans changed over time. They became
taller, faster, older, and fatter. In the beginning, they all had similar
cultures, convention, and idealism. However, they evolved to have diverse
cultures and practices. As time went by, every individual started to have
different opinions and formed diverse backgrounds. Now anyone can be unique,
and have any idealistic in the contemporary society. Therefore, the topic art
and music class should be added to young children’s classes like science and
math can have varieties of points of view. However, based on my cultural backgrounds,
I would agree. First, children can improve their creativity by taking music and
art classes. Second, it can help them to release their stress.
To begin with, taking music and art classes
improves their creativity. These days, job markets prefer to employ creative
people because they have innovative ways to solve problems. To get a job when
they grow up, students should take music and art classes to enhance their
ingenuity. For example, when my cousin was a student, he learned music and art lessons,
so that he could develop his creativity. He was not a model student who had
gotten high grades but he got a job earlier than most of his classmates because
his inventive answer impressed him employer in a job interview. It had such a
huge influence on me that I believe art and music class should be added to
young children’s classes.
In addition, children who takes music and
art classes can release their stress. As they release their stress through
singing and drawing, children can more concentrate on their study. Concentration
on study comes from taking music and art classes. For instance, when I was a
young, I always focused on study without stress because I could release my
stress by taking art and music classes. In addition, thanks to art and music
classes, I could got high grades. From my experience, one can infer that learning
music and art can help children to release their stress.
After the rationale, the essay reached a
conclusion. In the end, a point of view which I have offered should not be
underestimated because I explained children can improve their creativity by taking
music and art classes and it can help them to release their stress. They are
all valid points to behold. Therefore, the postmodernist societies should gravitate
toward the topic.