30분안에 써야지 하다가 쓰다보니까 1시간이나 되어버렸습니다.
글도 길어지구요..
시간 안에 쓰는 좋은방법 없을까요?
저는 순서대로 쓰는편인데 그것보다
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포맷을 미리 써두고 순서 꼭 안지키고 쓰는게 효율적일까요?
오늘날 인터넷을 통해 valuable information에 access 하는게 좋다는 사람도 있고 그 정보들이 problem을 일으킨다는 사람들도 있는데, 너는 어떻게 생각하느냐
In the information technology society, people can access internet and obtain useful information by sharing their data. Some people maintain that people’s valuable information can be trespassed in the point that every people who just can use the internet download or spread the information. However, in my opinion, security systems are already existed and it is advantageous to access valuable information when the users treat their information carefully. This is because people do not have to visit specific place directly to treat their valuable information and sharing precious data makes profitable results between internet users.
Above all, people can dispose their tasks which involve precious information on internet without effort to visit places directly. The best advantage of the internet is that it makes people communicate or share their files and information not in directly but in on-line system. For instance, in old days, people had to visit the bank in person when they wanted to treat their financial tasks. However, people do not waste time to visit the bank and wait their sequence with using internet. They also do not have to concern the bank hour because there is no limited time to send or receiving money on internet. Since the banks also provide powerful security system, people do not worry about problem with their money and they can check a processing status of their financial tasks whenever they want.
Moreover, the ultimate aim of the internet is sharing information between users. Especially, the more valuable information, the more beneficial profits that user can obtain. Since only information which is uploaded by the users can be shared by other users, people can fairly prevent from making problem with their privacy when they treat the valuable information carefully. For example, I had an experience to write a thesis in university and I had a problem with finding research data. A friend, who lived in another country, gave some important data which contains private information to me on his internet homepage. Finally, I finished my thesis successfully with help of my friend. Since, he made password to access the files and deleted the files when after I downloaded the file, there was no problem with leaking the precious information.
In conclusion, I believe that it is advantageous method that people access and share their valuable information on internet. This is because there are certain ways to protect their information and it is apparently convenient and profitable to work on internet.