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│ TOEFL TWE Topic 23.
│ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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│ Students are studying various disciplines of knowledge(생략). However, it is controversial which disciplines are more important than others. Some people argue that studying history and literature is more momentous than studying science and mathematics. I disagree with this idea, although history and literature are necessary to establish the personality and sociality of a student. In my opinion, studying science and mathematics becomes more important, since the society evolves based on the scientific renovations these days.
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│ Studying history and literature is essential for students’ mental and social development. From history, students learn the way of thinking with which they could analyze social problems; from literature, they learn how to express their emotions and how to share other people’s emotions. In my case, a historical book I read during my middle-school age affects most my viewpoint about social problems, and a novel I read during that period is still the most impressive in my whole life. In other words, history and literature learned during one’s school age are very important to constitute his/her point of view and emotional sense.
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│ However, it is not reasonable to say that studying history and literature is more important than studying science and mathematics. Students should be taught rational thinking, since it is highly required to solve a physical and even a social problem. Science and mathematics teach students how to think rationally and how to explain natural phenomena rationally. These abilities are hardly obtained through the study of history and literature. In addition, in modern society science and technology play a main role of changing the society. So-called information society could come true due to the scientific renovations, such as computer technology and the Internet. Thus, understanding science and its basic tool of description, mathematics, is needed than before.
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│ In conclusion, I disagree with the idea that students should study history and literature rather than science and mathematics, since rational thinking could be learned by science and mathematics rather than history and literature. Besides, today’s science-oriented society leads to more emphasis on the study of science and mathematics.
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