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┼ ▨ 문법을 수정하면서.... - jin ┼
제가 아는 한도에서 조금^;;;;^글,문법을 수정을 합니다....님의 고귀한 글을 제 마음대로 수정을 해서 먼저 용서를 구하면서....제 생각으로는 정말로 잘 쓰셨네요...
Our life is a series of decisions. Often,we confront problems we must solve by making decisios.Everyone has his or her own ways to address problems. It can be said that how we deal with these prolems will determine our lives. Some people say that the decision should be made after careful thought. It can be one way we can choose to work out trouble. However, I disagree that making a decision without long thought is always wrong. Furthermore, I think that careful thought cannot guarantee the rightness of the decisions, although it is a very good way to achieve what we want. I will show you several specific reasons to support my belief.
In some cases, a quick decision is everything. As a project manager working at a cosmetic company, I always have to make a "go/stop" decision when new kinds of products are proposed. Whenever I have to decide, I push my colleagues to get more information such as other companies' new products, prodection costs, market conditions, preliminary customers' response, etc. Sometimes, I would take several months to make a perfect decision.(But~~~I did)솔직히 이 부분은 제가 이해를 못해서..죄송....Although the products turned out to be very popular, our company lost a chance to get an advantageous position by delaying the product trlease. In this cases, I realized that quick decisions are just as important as thoughtful dicisions.
This world is full of unknown things. We can't even know what will happen in our own life tomorrow. This is uncertainty ture for decision-making. So impulsive dicisions can often turn out to be the best ones. For example, an experienced team leader in my company dares to say that his decisions depend on his own intuition much more than on objective data. Without thoughtful consideration, he often chooses the product for commercialization and has very successful results.
In summary, good decisions can be affected by many factors which cannot be anticipated by thoughtful consideration. External environments, personal experiences, intuition, and accidents can also affect how correct our decisions are. Therefor, quick decisions can be right in some cases.
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┼ ▨ Re..에세이 한번 봐주실래요? 120번 토픽 - 쩝.. ┼
무척 잘 쓰셨네요.. 거의 완벽..
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┼ ▨ 에세이 한번 봐주실래요? 120번 토픽 - 구마 ┼
│ 처음 써보는 건데...의견을 들어보고 싶어서 올립니다.
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│ 120. Decisions can be made quickly, or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
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│ Our life is a series of decisions. At every blink, we confront the problems to be solved by our own decision. Everyone has his own way to address the problems. It can be said that how to deal with these problems will determine our life. Some people say that the decision should be made after careful thought. It can be one way we can choose to work out the troubles. But, I disagree that making a decision without long thought is always wrong. Furthermore, I think that careful thought cannot guarantee the rightness of the decisions, although it is a very good way to achieve what we want. I will show you several specific reasons to support my belief.
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│ In some cases, quick decision is everything. As a project manager working with a cosmetic company, I always have to make a ‘go/stop’ decision when new kinds of products are proposed. Whenever I have to decide, I push the backs of my colleagues to get more information, such as other companies’ new products, production costs, market conditions, preliminary customers’ responses, etc. Sometimes, I would spend several months to make a perfect decision. But, I have ever had an experience to get into trouble because other competitive company released the same product to the market before I did. Although the products turned out to be very popular, our company lost a chance to get an advantageous position by delaying the product release. In this case, I realized that quick decision is very important as much as thoughtful decision.
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│ This world is full of unknown things. We cannot even expect our own life of tomorrow. This is true for decision-making. Sometimes, impulsive decision turns out to be the best one. For example, I like to mention an experienced team leader in my company. He dares to say that his decision depends on his own intuition much more than on objective data. Without thoughtful consideration, he often chooses the product for commercialization and has very high successful results.
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│ In summary, good decision can be affected by many factors which cannot be expected by our own thoughtful consideration. External environments, personal experiences or intuition, and accidents can also affect the rightness of our decision. Therefore, quick decisions can be right in some cases.
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