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│ 0056 A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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│ If a company is deciding(=> decides) whether to give some money to support the arts or to protect the environment, I would tell them to choose to protect the environment. We have plenty of time to enjoy arts(=> To protect environment is more immediate than to enjoy atrs). However if(=> If) we don't care about our environment at the right moment, it will be too late to recover it later. Also, this environment which we are living(=> live) in will soon be the home of our descendants. We have the duty to keep it clean.
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│ We have many chances to enjoy arts. Even if we don't go to an art gallery today, we can go tomorrow or some other time. However, if we just leave the environment polluted and don't care about it today, It might be too late to cure the environment tomorrow. Some people in Korea hasn't cared about the environment thinking they would be able to recover it later. That wrong understanding has brought our clean country to a polluted one.
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│ This place, the environment, is where our descendants will be living in. It is our duty to keep the environment clean. Of course, leaving great art works or music for our descendants is important. However, it would be no use if they get to live in a polluted environment. It will be hard to enjoy the artworks.
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│ Though everything is important to live : art, environment......, I think the environment is most (=>the most)important. We can live without arts, music. Those things are what people want. However, the environment is what people need. If we don't care about it now, we will probably regret after its too late(=> that because it is too late for us to restore the nevironment ). Also(=> Thus), it is a duty for people to maintain the clean environment for our descendants. We should live taking good care of our environment.
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