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│ 0173 (AD) 0143 It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
│ We often see money and friendship don't go together. Friendship is involved with sincerity and fidelity. However, money is rather businesslike. Friendship involved in money is easy to be broken. Here are some reasons.
│ To begin with, money is rather businesslike. On the other hand, friendship is more about personal faith between friends. No matter how scanty amount of money you ask of your friend to lend you, it is easy to bring some trouble to the friendship of yours. For example, when I forgot the fact that I'd borrowed some money from one of my best friends, my friend was really upset. She couldn't ask me to give the money back because she didn't want to be cheap to me. She told that to another friend of mine and I heard that from her. I was pretty cross with the fact that she’d told someone else rather than me directly though I acknowledged that I had and felt sorry to her. We didn't talk to each other for a while and never asked for money again.
│ Sometimes, borrowing money from your friend can cause him to get in serious financial problem. When your friend is afflicted by a serious money problem, you can easily get sympathetic to your friend and try to find out the way to help him. A friend of mine got on a serious credit card debt because her friend. My friend was still a student and supported by her parents. Her friend didn't even have any place to stay nor money because she lost everything when her father's company went under during the Korean economy crisis. My friend was sorry about that and she started to lend money to her. First time, it didn't seem a lot but she found that she had used her card too much after her friend vanished. My friend was almost dying. Finally, her father got to know that and he solved the problem, but now she hates even thinking about her because she thinks she was exploited by her own friend.
│ Money is what we should be most careful of when involved in friendship. To keep your precious friendship, you need to be clear about money with your friends, otherwise you'd better relinquish the money you lent to your friends if the friendship is so important to you.
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