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반대
Everyone is supposed to have a job for his or her life. By having a job he or she can earn money to spend and live diligently and energetically everyday. However with teenagers, it becomes a bit different. If a teenager have a job while he is a student there will be some problems.
Firstly, the student's genuine job is 'being a student' which means going to a school and doing his home work everyday. Unless, it's summer or winter holiday, the student won't have enough time to concentrate on studying and do it properly and maybe fail in a examination.
Secondly, even if he carries out both works well, since he worked really hard he will soon get tired. So there is a change of him getting ill and possibly not able to do any of them.
Thirdly, the reason why he tries to earn money is beacuse his parents don't have enough money to afford his study and he wants to continue his study, he can barrow some money from a bank and pay them when he grows up.
Furthermore if the real reason he want to carry out his job is to use it in traveling and playing with his friends, it is really not a good idea because he have to sacrifice his studying time.
There maybe few good advantage if he gets a job while he is a student but by trying to do both work together, he could miss both of them. The most important task given to a student is to study hard, get a good mark in a exam. By doing that he can get a much better job later when he graduated from a school.
찬성
Nowadays, most people in the world have a job. There are so many different kinds of occupations that we don't know how many is there and everyday new jobs are created. Having a job is good for every people, because the job will give them money to spend and make their life busy. It is not an exception to a student that by having an avocation, he can have many advantages.
Firstly, he can get some experiences of real world, at a fairly early age. Life in the school and life in the 'real world' is really different, because in the letter life there is no teacher who guide him to a right way and he have to go through it by himself and when he fulfilled he will feel confident about himself.
Secondly, with the money he earned, he can use it to buy things he wants. It can be a stationery or a CD player or a book. Moreover he can give some money to his parents and release some burdens parents have by increasing the family income.
Thirdly, it is common knowledge that a person who had a job when he is young is more mature than a person who spend his whole youth in front of a desk. He will know how to behave to an older person and feel more responsibility.
Having a job while he is a student could make his life really hard to proceed. However after having gone through the hard work, he will get many rewards, good amount of money to spend and feel confident to carry out his life.