▶ Your Answer : Some people might think that spending their time on personal enjoyment-doing things is helpful to make their life more happier. But, I personally believe that "too much" spend their time on just enjoyable thing make a negative effect to live thire life more competitively. And, when people do not spend a enough time on doing things they should do, that make a significant problem in whole society. Let me explain specific reasons which supporting my opinion.
First. I think that "too much" spend their time on just enjoyable thing will negative effect to people's life. If people just use thier time properly to enjoyable things, that is not a big problems. But these day people usually "too much". Too much computer games, shopping, and play with friends are make their life less competitively. Think about the students. If students are always spend their time on enjoyable thing, they will be get a lower score. This is one of my reasons why I think that people do not spend too much time on their personal enjoyment-doing things.
Second, if people do no not use thier time on doing things they should do, that make a problem in a whole society. Doing things they should do means not only personal events but also participate in official events in society. For example, if people do not particiate in election to go trip for enjoying their personal life, that could make a fail government. In these reason, people should spend enough their time on doing thing they should do.
To sum up, I suggest that if people "too much" spend their time on just enjoyable thing make a two negative result. First, because they spend "too much" time on thier personal enjoyable thing, they can not use enough time to thire own duty and that will be make less competitiveness. Also, because they do not keep their duty, whole society will get a significant problems.
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