■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :
Some people say that the
Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think
access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that the internet provide
too much information and it may cause problems. However, I believe that the
internet provides much valuable information, but it may not cause problems for
two reasons. This is because information provided by the internet enables
people to broaden perspectives and enjoy a better quality of life.
First, information provided by the internet
enables people to broaden perspectives. Understanding the expansion of the
knowledge and the potential role of the information of the internet in
necessary to substantiate this view. Before the internet created, people only
knew about their town and country. This made people to be neglect the other
cultures that are different from their own. However, the easy access to the new
information from all corner of the globe has allowed people to understand
others more easily and start to accept them as what they are. In this regard,
information provided by the internet enables people to broaden perspectives and
it may prevent problems that are used to be created from the ignorance.
Second, information provided by the internet
enables people to enjoy a better quality of life. In response to the increasing
role of a lot of valuable information from the internet, many expert opinions
and research statistics reinforce the idea that valuable information from the
internet enables people to make the best decision. For example, when I was a
high school student, I needed to find what was the best college I could go.
There was so much information as many colleges I wanted to enroll. However, I
could develop the skill to distinguish the good information from the bad
through this experience. Eventually, I could find the college that matched me
and succeed to enroll there. In this regard, information provided by the
internet enables people to make the best decision and enjoy a better quality of
life.
To sum up, I believe that the internet
provides much valuable information, but it may not cause problems for the
following reasons; to broaden perspectives and enjoy a better quality of life.
Consequently, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated for the
reasons I mentioned above.
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