▶ Your Answer :There might be some people who believe that watch watching a serious movie is better than watch an entertaining movie. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for subsequent reasons. First, watching entertaining movies help relieve helps to release stress. Second, it is good for relationships. First, stress can be relived by watching entertaining movies so that people can forget about their stress and can be refreshed so that they can work more effectively back to their jobs. This is because people today are under a lot of stress and pressure due to the competitiveness of today's society. Let me bring up my older sister's story as an example. My older sister is studying studies a master course now. Last week, she looked so depressed and feeled felt really down because of her master's thesis. So, I suggested her to go to watch a comedy movie. After watching the movie, she was relaxed and feeled refreshed which help her to study and research more efficiently. If it were not for these movies, she could not get out of a slump easily. Moreover, people can improve their relationship through watching entertaining movies. To be specific, while watching entertaining movies, people can spend time and laugh together. This makes opportunity to talk with and exchange each other's opinion about the movie. And it helps make a memory of sharing pleasant experience. According to the survey done by JYP institute of sociology,79% of respondents said that watching entertaining movie is the best way to become intimate. They said they can be familiar with each other due to they can have a common subject to talk with pleasant emotion if they watch entertaining movie. This clearly shows that watching an entertaining movie is a good way to strengthen relationships. In conclusion, watching entertaining movies not only help relieve helps to release stress but also it it is good way for relationships. In this regard, I personally believe that entertaining movies are better than serious movies. Good; 24~30 점수: 24 일단 대채적으로 내용면에 있어서는 아주 잘 서술된 에세이 입니다. 각 바디의 예시들이 이유를 아주 잘 서포트 하고 있습니다. 하지만 아쉬운 점은 제가 참석한 것을 보앗듯이 반복적인 문장들이 많습니다. 따라서 똑같은 말이나 불필요한 문장들을 서술하는 것을 자제 해주시고 간결하게 본인의 의견을 전달하는 것이 가장 좋을 거 같습니다. 수고많으셧습니다. |