■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : An inexperienced worker at a lower salary is better
than an experienced worker at a higher salary. |
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▶ Your Answer : Some people might say that an inexperienced
worker is better than an experienced worker because the company have to give a
lot of salary to the experienced worker. However, in my opinion, hiring an
experienced worker will bring many benefits than inexperienced one. This is
because they works effectively and makes few mistakes than inexperienced
employees.
First of all, experienced workers have
efficient style of work. They could make lots of outcomes compared to the beginner
worker at the same time. For example, a group of economist conducted a survey
which investigates the relationship between working experience and their
outcome. They collected five hundreds of employees from the factory as the
respondent. Half of them worked just one month and the others worked more than
three years. The researchers asked them how many products they could make in a
week. The beginners answered that they could make seven products in average.
The skilled workers said that they could produce twelve products in average.
According to survey result, the experienced workers could make more than five
products in a week compared to the beginner. Thus, the researchers concluded
that an experienced worker works more effectively than worker who just starts
work. Accordingly, although the experienced workers required a lot of salary,
they give more outcomes to the company in efficient way.
Second, inexperienced workers make various
mistakes which could bring damages to the company. On the contrary, experienced
workers usually do not make a crucial mistake. This is a big difference between
inexperienced workers and experienced one. When I was working in the broadcasting
station, there were two copywriters. One just started her career and another
worked for five years. The former writer made many mistakes. Therefore, other
writers spent their office hour to support her. Yet, the skilled writer did not make mistakes.
Unfortunately, the beginner writer was not helpful to the broadcasting station.
Also, sometimes she made big mistakes in the on-air. Thus, hiring a skilled
worker is beneficial to prevent an important mistake.
In conclusion, although the experienced
workers required big salary, I insist that they are better than inexperienced
workers, since the experienced workers work more effectively and make few
mistakes. |
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