Opinions might be divided over whether television and movies have more negative effects than positive effects on children’s behavior. (주어진 문제를 정확하게 서술하세요. paraphrase할 거면 의미가 손실되지 않게 제대로 옮기세요.) People of various ages and from different walks of life may take divers positions on this controversial issue. Nevertheless, we cannot deny the fact that television and movies does affect kids with lots in a lot of negative sides ways. So, I side with the perspective that they affect children's behavior seriously.
First of all, they can lead children to risky behavior. Some people who in opposite side of my perspective say that many programs of TV or movies include educational factors or contain some lessons. Advocates' claims may sound reasonable enough on the surface. However, anyone in opposite side can't deny that There are too many sensational things on television and in movies for children. They are too young to be exposed to them (sensational things는 복수) that. They often cannot tell the difference between reality and fantasy. I have a personal example supporting my oppinion opinion. A few weeks ago, I had a chance to read an article in the Dong- A Daily News that is was related to the topic. It said was about a child who died while imitating a movie stunt. We all know Many heros in movies like such as Spiderman, Superman or betman Batman must be an idol for children and now we can't contradict cannot deny that it they can lead kids to terrible risks.
In addition, It television and movies can bring about moral confusion for children. TV Television and movies lack clear sense of what is right and wrong. We often see heroes on TV television engage in illegal activities to catch criminals. I can say an observation about this. This An observation was conducted by Seoul National University psychology researchers with 500 children and found that 80% of the children became more violent after they saw an hero movie. This clearly confirm that it they bring children about moral confusion.
As mentioned above, based on the previous example and an observation related to the topic, I can conclude that it will be a wiser choice to avoid letting children to watch TV television or movies too much.
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