◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- If I could eat snack
-> If I could eat snacks
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유들이 모두 적절하고 설명이 잘 되어있습니다.
- 설명과 주제를 한번씩 연결해주세요. Therefore, if the school allows students to eat in class, they will be able to concentrate more.
◆ Comments
- 문장들을 조금 더 깔끔하게 정리해주시면 좋을 것 같아요.
- I had a chance to learn in a science lecture and I was really hungry because it was before the lunch time so I wasn't even able to concentrate to the lecture.
-> I was very hungry during my science class last semester because it was always held before lunch time. So I was not able to concentrate to the lecture.
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