◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- 수정할 사항 없습니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- this is because she can rearrange the QnA session at any time without any efforts (어색한 표현입니다) and it is not hard
---> This is because rearranging the QnA session is not a very difficult thing to do.
- the choir concert cannot be delayed
---> the choir concert cannot be postponed
- she needs a lot of practice for her whole team and for her
----> she needs a lot of practice for her whole team and also for herself.
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 제시하신 이유 두가지 모두 논리적으로 설명을 잘 하셨습니다.
- 내용의 구조와 흐름이 좋습니다.
Independent Speaking Rubrics Score: 4