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It has been widely debated whether students should be rewarded based
on their effort such as doing their best rather than based on the result such
as grades. People of different ages and from different walks of life may take
different positions on this controversial issue. We cannot deny the fact that
evaluating their academic performance plays an important role on lives of most
students. Personally, I disagree that students should be guaranteed dependent
on their endeavor such as doing their best rather than dependent on the
achievement such as grades for the following two reasons. : success and
reference
To
begin with, It can be beneficial to the future career prospects. Some believe
that it is better that students should be rewarded relied on their effort
rather than relied on their grades. Advocates of this view may sound reasonable
enough on the surface. They even cite a few examples that sound logical.
However, if we can take a closer look at them, the rationale for their
assertions lacks solid evidence for many ways. My personal examples can debunk
their claims. Students need a great of expertise to survive in the competitive
world. Therefore, If students should be able to assess their performance based
on their grades, they can get specialty to become a bright mind in any fields.
This is because students can be motivated good grades more and more. Let's take
my sister H.Y as an example. She became a successful designer because when she
was in high school, she was compensated for based on her grades and thus she
did her best in order to get good grades. She is now recognized as one on the
most successful figures her industry. Whenever, she was asked the secret to her
success, she used to say that she learned skills by doing effort for a increase
her academic performance helped her get competition in the field. For as H.Y,
the insight she gained let her ahead of others. The same applies to most
students who compensate for based on their performance. They will also achieve
great success.
In
addition, beyond my sister's experience, there is a considerable amount of
research which can support my contention. Understandably, a substantial amount
of survey respondents expressed doubts that are similar to mine. A few weeks
ago, I had a chance to read an article posted by my friend on Facebook about a
survey that is related to the topic. Of 5000 social media users surveyed at Seoul
National University. 65 percent answered that it is unfair that students should
be awarded their effort such as doing their best. The reason is that there are
no standards that guarantee students. To be specific, all students respectively
have different level of doing best.
Ultimately, because of the examples related success and reference, I can
conclude that students should be awarded relied on their endeavor like doing
their best rather than relied on their consequence like grades.
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