■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :
The reasons why global warming trend occur. |
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▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage
contends that rising global temperatures is caused by specific factors
indicated. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that
contradict this argument.
First of all, the lecturer points out that methane
which released in landfills is not a contributor to global warming. This is
attributed to the fact that it accounts for less 9 percents people released and
it only makes up less 1 percent in the atmosphere. This refutes the author’s
point that a significant contributor to lead global warming is the creation of
landfills.
Moreover, in the lecture, the point is made
that deforestation is not one of causes to global warming. This is because a
trees which would die and decay release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere, but
deforestation helps delay this process. This casts doubt on the idea of the
reading passage that rising global temperatures is caused by the deforestation.
The final point made by lecturer is that occurring
natural cycle of climate change is not related to the current warming trend.
This is obvious that Medieval Warm Period is not global event and during this
period, regions’ temperatures were actually lower than they are now. This is
different from the passage’s view that occurring naturally this cycle of global
temperatures contributes to the global warming trend.
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The reading passage contends that rising
global temperatures is caused by specific factors indicated. On the other hand,
the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this argument.
First of all, the lecturer points out
that methane which (are) released in (from) landfills is not a contributor to global
warming. This is attributed to the fact that it accounts for less (than) 9 percents (of gas) people released and it only makes up less (than) 1 percent (of gas) in the atmosphere. This refutes the author’s point that a
significant contributor to lead global warming is the creation of
landfills.
Moreover, in the lecture, the point
is made that deforestation is not one of causes to global warming. This is
because a trees which would die and decay release carbon dioxide into the
atmosphere, but deforestation helps delay this process.(How? Why?) This casts doubt on the idea of the
reading passage that rising global temperatures is caused by the deforestation.
The final point made by lecturer is
that occurring natural cycle of climate change is not related to the current
warming trend. This is (It
is) obvious that
Medieval Warm Period is not global event and during this period, regions’ temperatures were
actually lower than they are now. This is different from the passage’s view that occurring naturally this cycle(naturally occurring cycles) of global temperatures contributes to
the global warming trend.
Writing 0-30 Score Scale
Limited (0-16)
Overall Comment: 토플 통합형
형식 맞게 잘 구성했습니다. 디테일이 매우 부족합니다. 특히, 본론의 2번째 문단에서 how? Why?
대한 디테일이 부족합니다. Lecturer을 들을 때 노트 필기를 잘 하세요. 그리고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 만약 아이디어나 포인트가 표현하기
힘들면 Lecturer의 표현들을 그대로 사용하세요.