▶ Your Answer :
Whether public transportation should be free to use or not
is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. After reviewing the opinions
from several perspectives, personally I
agree with the idea that it public
transportation is
should be allowed to use for free for the following two reasons: it can prevent air
pollution and reduce traffic jam.
To begin with, it can be beneficial to reducing air
pollution. While many consider that there are a lot of ways in improving reducing
air pollution, we cannot deny the fact that many people do would not need
to drive their automobiles if public transportation
were free and air pollution would be reduced than before. Preventing air
pollution is a important issues because people who live in urban or city cities
are suffered suffer
from vehicle smoke and they are not able to
cannot breathe fresh air. In addition, last
Friday, a well-known professor (누구?)
published an editorial in his field and as a result,
he which supported my view. He said
that good air quality is vital for human life because it leads to strong immune
system and healthy state. He concluded his research by saying that breathing
fresh air arouses people to actively participate in their work and to do their
best.
On top of that, to strengthen my view point, it is a great
way to decrease traffic jam. This is because a lot of cars would be reduced on
the road especially for rush hours and people would take public transportation
more often. Furthermore, it provides a perfect opportunity of individuals to
manage their time more efficiently and to do other activities which means they
are able to save their time. For instance, my cousin became a best fund manager
for in a
short time and told me a secret about her success. She said that taking public
transportation during rush hours was helpful to manage her schedule and learn
multiple skills because she could arrive in working
place at workplace earlier. This
proves to us that public transportation for free is important in building a
bright future.
In conclusion, I strongly argue that my standpoints of the
two reasons are sufficiently convincing. In this regard, I believe that public transportation is useful (주제가 이게 아니었죠?
무료로 해야 할지 말아야 할지를 물었는데.) for people because it
contributes to prevent air pollution and reduce traffic jam.
Writing 0-30 scale
Fair(17-19)
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