▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that children should be devoted more time to doing schoolwork with their parents. However, I personally disagree with the above idea for the two subsequent reasons. First, parents should relieve their children's stress. Second, a relationship between children and their parents can be improved by playing games or sports together.
First, parents should help their children relieve their stress. This is because children have so many things to do for their future careers, so they already have a huge amount of schoolworks and homeworks. Therefore, they are stressed enough and parents' help can make the situations worse. According to recent research done by Korea university, children who do schoolwork with their parents are likely to have more stress than who do not. This clearly shows it can give children more stress for their parents to devote their time to doing schoolwork with their children.
Second, parents can improve a relationship between their children by playing games or sports. To explain, children are so busy with their schoolwork due to the competitiveness of today's society, so they don't have time to play with their parents. As many people already know, playing together is very important to a family. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. When I was a child, my parents played many kinds of games and sports with me and my brother. By these activities, I could understand my parents and love them more and more. All of my family members love each other so much until today, and I think it is because playing with my parents improved our relationship.
In conclusion, it does not only relieve children's stress, but also improve their relationship for parents to play with their children. In this regard, I firmly believe that parents should devote a lot of time playing games or sports with their children. |