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There are ongoing debates that whether creativity plays a more important role to reach a goal than a well-organized plan does. Some people, perhaps most of them, agrees that without creativity humans cannot could not accomplish brilliant historic events such as launching space rockets and building a magnificent skylounges. However, I strongly believe that making a deliberate plan is the most important job to reach a goal. The rational behind this is the following. First of all, it is the diligence and well-organized plan, not creativity that helps the job keep going to the goal by organized process. For instance, I recently saw that news on Mr. Song (full name please) who was publically recognized as a genius at an early age was known guilty for plagiarism when he published his university report doctoral thesis. He is was a prominent person with his creativity and brilliance, but didn’t did not make an effort to being diligent and plan well enough to finish his report as well as doctor’s degree. (이렇게 report라고 하면, 보통 과제나 보고서 등을 가리킵니다. 사건에서 문제가 된 것은 학위논문이었죠.) Secondly, one can push the work done with brilliant ideas at first, but may fail to reach a goal without deliberate plan. Imagine that you are at NASA and are preparing to launch a rocket to Mars. Even small frictions in bolts can make huge pressure on a the rocket and lead to a failure of launching it. Therefore, you should make a deliberate list to review all the details on a plan whether a plan is well accomplished at each level to avoid a failure. To sum up, I agree that delicate plan is more important than creativity when people try to reach a goal, because delicate plan leads process well organized and without plan the probability of failure is very high. Writing 0-30 scale Fair(23-25) 자신의 주장을 지지하는 point를 적절히 선택하고 설명했습니다. TOEFL 독립형 글쓰기의 채점기준은 글의 길이가 300단어 이상일 것을 요구합니다. (현재 279단어) 또, TOEFL 글쓰기는 academic writing skill을 평가하는 시험입니다. 따라서 축약형 등 비격식체와 구어체를 피하고 정확한 영어를 사용해야 합니다. 영어는 시제에 민감한 언어입니다. 한 문장 안에 여러 절이 있을 때에는 각 절마다 동사의 시제 사이의 관계가 어떻게 되는지를 잘 살펴보세요. 관사(a/an, the)를 어떤 경우에 어떤 것을 붙이고 어떤 경우에 붙이지 않는지를 확인해보세요. |