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A lot of people these days like travelling abroad or taking time off to visit different places. People do this in order to reduce stress that they gain from work or studies and because they realize the importance of traveling as it helps them to recharge their energy thus the issue of where, how, with whom to go is always a topic that must be considered. This essay will attempt to analyse the benefits and disadvantages of traveling with a companion or traveling alone.
First of all, most people travel or visit new places in a group, for example, with their family, friends or classmates. This can be cost worthy and time-consuming as more money will be spent for accomodation, transportation and more food. The cost will be times the number of companion that one will travel with.
Next, disputes and arguments may follow as different people will have different opinions of where to go or what they want to do. It will be very hard to gather all the options and choose the best solution that everyone would prefer. For example, when i visited France with my best friend, we both had different opinions on where to visit on the last day therefore decided to have different tour in Paris. This demonstrates that traveling with a lot of companions may lag or deter the voyage.
On the other hand, When traveling with a friend or a companion, it may be more fun. It will always provide a new experience depending on who you travel with, and this is infact the reason why people choose to travel with different people. Many young people these days decide to travel with foreigners or strangers and through their trips retain friendship with each other.
Also, when traveling with a group of people, the members can become more cooperative and may get to know more about each other. It allows people to become more familiar with each other and this is the reason why schools often have school trip at the begining of the year.
In conclusion, traveling or taking a break is very important in life. This is because it refreshes our mind and allows us to have new experiences. In this regard, I believe that no matter who you travel with, it has its own advantages and disadvantages.
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