▶ Your Answer :
Some people think it is better to postpone the
assignment until close to the deadline, so they prefer it. However, in my
opinion, working on it right away is the best thing that I can do, therefore I
prefer it. This is because always there are possibilities that other
assignment or something can happen, and it is less stressful.
To become
with, time-consuming things can occur when deadline is close, so you might
not finish it. Imagine that another professor gives you a lot of
assignments abruptly and the deadline is same between all homeworks. Would
it be possible to complete whole assignments perfectly? It is highly
doubtful. The only way to do them completely would be to working on it as
soon as you get them. <- 조금 더 일반화 해서 설명 해주세요. Ex) People cannot
expect what will happen in the future. Emergencies or other assignments but
come out of nowhere 등등 For
example, when I was in high school, a teacher gave me extra homeworks and
it was to write an essay. I did not want to write it, so I did not do that
until three days ago. However, suddenly I had to go to my grand parent's
house which was far from my home so I did not have much time. I completed
the essay but it was terrible, and naturally I got a bad grade.
On top of that, you can get less
stress from the assignment. To
explain, you can have enough time to complete it, find mistakes and adjust
it. Therefore, you cannot get much stress from thinking about which your
assignment has mistakes or not, and get a high score. For instance, a
study was conducted by the Department of Education, Korea University, to
measure the amount of stress of students in two groups. The first group of
students did their work soon after they knew that they have some
assignments. The second group of students started to do their homeworks
when the deadline was tomorrow. The researchers compared the outcomes and
recorded that the former attained less stress than the latter. This was
because the former did not have to worry about mistakes or deadlines. <- stress 로
잡는 것 보다 완성도 를 keyword 로 잡는게 좋을거 같아요. Feedback
받고, error 수정 할 시간이 더 많다 보니 더 좋은 결과물이 나온다 정도로만 써줘도
될거 같아요.
To sum up, considering the fact that I might have
another works, and I did not have to suffer mentally from the assignment, there
seems be no reasons for me to postpone the work.
Writing 0-30 Score
Scale
Fair (17-23)
Overall Comment: Body 1 에서는 다른 professor 가 과제를 내준다는 이야기 보다는, 미래에 어떤 갑작스러운 일들이 있을지 모른다 정도로 일반화 해주세요.
Body 2 에서도 코멘트 부분 처럼, stress 말고 완성도에 focus 맞춰주면 좋을거 같아요.. |