▶ Your Answer :
According to the reading,
the reading passage shows that the
historians and explorers evident that the <- grammatical error Amazon civilizations high
development has not supported in advanced civilization. In the
lecture, the professor doesn't agree with the reading passage that the
exploration's theory does -> is
not appropriate and gave several reasons why it does not clearly right. First, the professor
argues that another evidence has shown that there had other sign which ancient
Amazon peoples were painted. <- 어색합니다. For
example. the lecturer mention that the roads and canals were connected. Then,
there has been showned the study which ancient Amazon society's people were
able cooperated by working. This casts doubt on the reading passage's
claim that the Amazon enormous community were does not available
because of jungle. Second, the lecturer
points out that the products of unsophisticated isn't true. The professor
said that the one island has a lot of amount of poverty. For example the Marayo
Island had a vase and bowls which we can understand that how ancients were
lived. <- 이거랑 unsophisticated 의 관계는? This counters the reading passage's claim that
ancient Amazon made the highest community. Finally, the lectuer
asserts that the European experts's study is impossible, and not true. The
lecturer said there was 5 million km2 land remaind, and the European's were not
explored at that place. And that place soon covered by Jungle which that
research demonstrated by French explorer in 19C. This refutes on the reading
passage's claim that Europeans said the Amazon society had the small amount of
population, and that is not part of human civilization. Writing 0-30 Score
Scale Limited (0-16)
Overall Comment: Grammatical
error 너무 많아서 내용 전달이 안되요. Listening
point 도 그냥 나열 하신거 같아요. Logical flow 가 없어요. 문법 공부 꼭 해주시고, 요약 한 내용 잘 끼워 맞추는 연습 꼭
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