■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :
Some
people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends
most of the time. Which do you prefer?
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people argue that some
people prefer to spend most of their time alone. However, in my opinion, this
perspective is not true for two following reasons which I am going to
elaborate.
To begin with, relationship with
friends is highly influential to each other. In detail, the relationship
between friends is one of the most influential and intimate relationships. Because
friends are same age, they have diverse bond of sympathy and similar thinking. Also,
as a close life companion, there are many things friends can do for each other,
such as passing on knowledge and skills, giving advice, and sharing personal
stories. Friends also guide me to build good character, which is an essential quality
to become a healthy member of the society. Take Warren Buffett, for instance. He
is a globally recognized CEO and an investor. Listed among Time’s 100 Most
Influential People, Buffett emphasized importance of relationship between
friends in his interview. Such comment sounds highly convincing since he is a
well-known man of success. Therefore, I believe that relationship between
friends is mostly influential.
In addition, by spending most of
time with friends, people can gain new experience. Unlike people usually spend
time alone in their home, they hang out with their friends in outdoors. By doing
so, they can undergo many situations naturally. In detail, People attain winder
knowledge and broader perspective through experience, which are qualities of a
successful person. People will always learn something from their experience,
even if it seems unenjoyable or difficult. Take Steve Jobs, for instance. He is
the founder of renowned company, Apple, who made remarkable accomplishments in
his lifetime. He was referred to as a genius and a visionary by the public. In his
speeches, Jobs repeatedly emphasized importance of acquiring diverse
experience. Thus, I think that spending time with friends will help to achieve
lots of experience.
On the whole, I believe l have
accurately demonstrated my point of view on this matter with two concrete
reasons and evidence stated above. Since view of life and values differ among
individuals, it seems like this subject will always remain controversial.
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Some
people argue that some people prefer to spend most of their time alone.
However, in my opinion, this perspective is not true(people should spend their time with other people) for two following reasons which I am going to elaborate. (이유들을 소개하세요)
To begin with,
relationship with friends is highly influential to each other. In detail, the
relationship between friends is one of the most influential and intimate
relationships. Because friends are same age, they have diverse bond of sympathy
and similar thinking. Also, as a close life companion, there are many things
friends can do for each other, such as passing on knowledge and skills, giving
advice, and sharing personal stories. Friends also guide me to build good
character, which is an essential quality to become a healthy member of the
society. Take Warren Buffett, for instance. He is a globally recognized CEO and
an investor. Listed among Time’s 100 Most Influential People, Buffett
emphasized importance of relationship between friends in his interview. Such
comment sounds highly convincing since he is a well-known man of success.
Therefore, I believe that relationship between friends is mostly influential.
In addition, by spending
most of time with friends, people can gain new experience. Unlike people (who) usually spend time
alone in their home, they(people who
are sociable) hang out with their
friends in outdoors. By doing so, they can undergo many situations naturally.
In detail, People attain winder knowledge and broader perspective through
experience, which are qualities of a successful person. People will always
learn something from their experience, even if it seems unenjoyable or
difficult. Take Steve Jobs, for instance. He is the founder of renowned
company, Apple, who made remarkable accomplishments in his lifetime. He was
referred to as a genius and a visionary by the public. In his speeches, Jobs
repeatedly emphasized importance of acquiring diverse experience. Thus, I think
that spending time with friends will help to achieve lots of experience.
On the whole, I believe l have
accurately demonstrated my point of view on this matter with two concrete
reasons and evidence stated above. Since view of life and values differ among
individuals, it seems like this subject will always remain controversial. (결론에는 이유들을 요약하고 글쓴이의 입장을 표현하세요)
Writing 0-30 Score Scale
Fair (17-23)
Overall Comment: 의견을 뒷받침
하는 적절한 이유와 예시를 선택했습니다. 하지만, 예시를
다양하게 선택하세요. (자기 경험, 연구, 사건 등) 서론은 글쓴이의 입장을 표현한 후 이유들을 소개하세요. 결론은 (요약-맺음말)형식 맞게 구성해주세요.