▶ Your Answer :
Both computer and book are useful tools for student to
provide valuable information. However, in consideration of more effective
reasons, what school purchases computer would bring about more advantages to student.
This is because buying computers offers equal accessibility and diverse
information.
First of all, it is fair that the more number of computers
allows students of any discipline to use school's facility with a wide range of
purpose. This is due to the fact that compared to books which could be only useful
for students who major in related areas or are particularly interesting the
subject, all students need computers to manage their assignments. For example, when
I was in college, computer labs are always crowded as students, and they even
have to wait their turn in every exam period because computers are not enough
to provide a lot of students. In fact, it simply cannot imagine that students
complete without computer because they should write essay at almost classes, search
for information and interact their peers in group study. On the other hand,
books provide limited students specific information. As university's money have
to go back into all students, it is better to increase the number of computers.
On top of that, computers play a more significant role in
access to a variety of resources which do not contain materials in books. This
is caused by the fact that all information would not publish in book forms.
Thus, students may want to gain various references such as dissertation,
periodicals and example of studies. Moreover, since some contents already release
electronic forms like e-books, they also read a couple of books. According to a
survey conduced by the Seoul National University of Korea, it is possible for
students to download numerous documents by using computers in university's lab
because the Internet based on university mostly connects other materials of
public libraries. As a result, students can gain recent information of their
academic subjects which updated in real-time. Also, however available their
individual laptop is, the information is only provided at their school. In this sense,
purchasing computers is beneficial than books.
All things considered, buying computers makes all student
happier and affords diverse information. In this regard, university should
choose efficient options in order to improve student's intellect.
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Your school has
enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the
library. Which should your school choose to buy computers or books? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.
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▶ Your Answer :
Both computers and books (use plural if you want to
make a general statement about a thing) are useful tools for students to provide get
valuable information. However, in consideration of effectiveness
more effective reasons, what school purchases purchasing computer would bring about more
advantages to the students, including This
is because buying computers offers equal accessibility to everybody and more
various diverse information.
First of all, it is fair that
the more number of computers allows students of any discipline to use
school's facility with a wide range of purposes.
This that is due to the fact that a book
might be only useful for those who major in the relevant subject or who
just have interest in the topic of it, while a computer is needed by
everyone for their assignments. compared to books which could be only
useful for students who major in related areas or are particularly
interesting the subject, all students need computers to manage their
assignments. (your thought needs to be expressed more clearly. It
took me so long to finally understand what you mean). For example,
when I was in college, computer labs are were
(tense consistency)
always crowded as with (*be crowded with) students, and they even had ve to wait for (*wait for something) their
turn in every exam midterm or final exam period
because the number of computers are were not enough to provide a lot of students.
In fact, it is almost impossible for students to
complete their program it simply cannot imagine that
students complete without computers
because they should write essays at almost every class classes, search for information
needed and interact with
their peers in for group projects study. Compared
to the number of computer users from one school, On the other
hand, books provide limited students specific information to lesser number of students. Therefore, as in
order for the university's school’s
money have to be used for go back
into all the students, it is better to
increase the number of computers.
On top of that, computers play a
more significant role in accessing to
a variety of resources which do not contain materials in that do not have print forms such as books. Some are only archived digitally nowadays. This
is caused by the fact that (awkward if you use it in this context) all information
would not publish in book forms. Thus, students may want to gain
various references such as dissertation, periodicals and example of
studies. Moreover, since some contents already release electronic forms
like for example, some books are only available through
computer in the form of ‘e-books.’ they also read a
couple of books. According to a survey conducedcted by the Seoul National University of Korea, it
is possible for students to download numerous documents by using computers
in their universityies's computer labs because thanks to the
Internet, all the resources of most public libraries are available in cyber
space and are linked together conveniently. the Internet based on
university mostly connects other materials of public libraries. As a
result, That is how students can gain knowledge of recent
journal articles of information of their academic subjects
fields which updated in real-time. Also,
however available their individual laptop is, the information is only
provided at their school. It does not matter
whether one can afford a computer for schoolwork. The school can suffice
the need. In this sense, purchasing computers is more beneficial than
books.
All things considered, buying
computers makes all students happier and affords
give access to more diverse information. In
this regard, university the school should
buy computers. choose efficient options
in order to improve student's intellect.
Your thoughts make sense to me, and your opinion sounds
reasonable. J good job!
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