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(With the development in) technology, people’s live are different from (how) it
was in the past. There are a lot of advantages from these breakthroughs. One of
the important changes in our society is the change of eating habits by
introducing diverse kitchen machinery and instant food. First, it allows people
to reduce time to cook. Second, people can try a diversity of types of food in
a short time
First of all, kitchen electric (electric
kitchen) appliance help today’s people to curtail burden of household
chores related to cooking. This is due to the fact that instead of people’s
workforce, kitchen devise assume a lot of tasks such as washing a dirty dishes
and adjusting fire. As a result, people can get more spare time far from
cooking. Let me bring up my personal story as an example. My mother (was) surprised
when I bought the dishwasher and electric cooker. She had never seen the
(that) kind of machinery. When she was younger, her mother poured much time
staying (in the) kitchen because she had to cook without any machinery. Come to
think of it, assignments to which mother were required were really difficult in
the old days. But, nowadays, anybody can prepare for our meals because we just
click button to make rice. Consequently, people can save enormous time in doing
other leisure activities.
On top of that, huge number of instant food help today’s
people to get access to many types of food quickly. This is because as the food
industry improves product’s quality and diversity. People can choose their meal
following their tasty (taste). This gives people to a lot of
satisfaction. However, these were not available for people in the past. For
instance, there was a study conducted by the Korea board of health in 2011 with
nuclear family as subjects. The purpose of the study was to understand how
people’s eating culture had changed. The researchers tracked modern family’s
schedule related to eating habits and compared the outcome with document of past.
They found that although they spent less time preparing food, they can intake
well-balanced meal because they made a habit of eating processes
(processed) food and the food included healthy ingredients.
To sum up, advancement of the food industry has a great impact
on people’s lifestyle. In addition, people are provided with quality food and
less toil to prepare for food. In this sense, standard of living is fostered in
terms of cooking culture.
Grade
: Good (24-30)
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