■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : in order to be well informed people should get info from different new sources |
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▶ Your Answer : I agree that people should get information from different news sources for the following reasons. First, people can broaden their perspective, and second, they can find their interest.
First of all, by getting information from a diverse new sources, people can enhance their insights and outlooks. While growing up, people are immersed by certain types of information and knowledge about this world through formalized education. The problem with this is that most of the information and knowledge are conveyed with the source's viewpoint and they can easily become shortsighted without having any changes to broden their horizon. Therefore, in order to have deeper views of the world and become more culture, they should be encouraged to delve into diverse sources of information in order to be well informed.
Second, this can allow people to uncover their aptitudes which they may have overlooked. Modern people are forced to lead highly scheduled lives as the world becomes more contentious and fast-paced than ever. Consequently, they ar elikely to miss chances to delve into issues from which they can tremendously benefit. This explains why it is better to be well informed with diverse sources of information in honing potential that they did not know they ever had.
In conclusion , the reasons stated above explains why it is essential to be informed with different news sources. |
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I agree that
people should get information from different news sources for the following
reasons. First, people can broaden their perspective, and second, they can find
their interest. (서론에
글쓴이의 입장을 표현하기 전 도입을 쓰세요.)
First of all,
by getting information from a diverse new sources, people can
enhance their insights and outlooks. While growing up, people are immersed by
certain types of information and knowledge about this world through formalized
education. The problem with this is that most of the information and knowledge
are conveyed with the source's viewpoint and they can easily become
shortsighted without having any changes to broaden their horizon.
Therefore, in order to have deeper views of the world and become more culture,
they should be encouraged to delve into diverse sources of information in order
to be well informed. (예시가
없습니다.)
Second, this
can allow people to uncover their aptitudes which they may have overlooked.
Modern people are forced to lead highly scheduled lives as the world becomes
more contentious and fast-paced than ever. Consequently, they are likely to
miss chances to delve into issues from which they can tremendously benefit.
This explains why it is better to be well informed with diverse sources of
information in honing potential that they did not know they ever had. (예시가 없습니다.)
In conclusion ,
the reasons stated above explains why it is essential to be informed with
different news sources. (결론에는 글쓴이의 입장을 다시 표현하세요)
Writing 0-30 Score Scale
Limited (0-16)
Overall Comment: 적절한 이유들을 선택했고 이유들을 주제와 잘 연결해서
설명했습니다. 문법 오류도 없습니다. 그러나, 본론에서 예시가 없습니다. 본론에는 장을 제시하고 주장에 대한 설명(논증) 2-3문장, 구체적인 예증 자료(언론보도자료, 연구결과, 나의 경험담 등을 주장과 연결 지어서 제시) 3-5문장 정도로 분량을 정해두세요. 결론에는 글쓴이의 입장을 다시 표현하세요. 서론에 글쓴이의 입장을 표현하기 전 도입을 쓰세요.