■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic :
Face-to-face
communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters,
e-mail, or telephone calls.
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▶ Your Answer :
Though the intense
argument is possible on the topic, I strongly agree with the statement that
face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication. Of
course, there are some advantages of these types of communication such as convenience
and a prompt response. However, I think that there are things that people can
more benefit from face-to-face interaction. This is because interaction through
face-to-face can more enhance our social skills and gives us emotional relief
than other types such as letters, e-mail, or telephone. The two ideas stated
below can be convincing evidence to support my view.
Most importantly, face-to-face
communication more enhances our social interaction than other types do such as
paper types or phone call. More and more businesses require people who are not
only specialists in their fields but also skilled in social interaction. In the
rapidly changing environment of businesses, no task can be done by a single
person. Given the need for collaboration, social interaction and team spirits
are necessary qualifications for any successful person. Clearly, face-to-face communication
can provide people to interact with other people more deeply than other types.
This is because it is more effective to communicate with other people
sincerely. By interacting with other people through face-to-face communication,
for instance, people can have a sense of belonging and unity, both of which are
vital in building a closer connection. A study conducted by a renowned
professor indicates that people can improve their social interaction with other
people in a much more effectual way if they interact with face-to-face. He also
goes on to say that it is more difficult for them to have sincere
relationships, if they just interact with other people through e-mail or phone
calls.
In addition, face-to-face
communication can provide people to find emotional relief much more than other
types. The reason why it is more effective for them is that other types of
communication often just skim the surface of the relationships. By
communicating with others through face-to-face, people can share their current
thinking with others more open-heartedly. People nowadays become weary caused
by too much stress. Through the deep interaction with others, they can
temporarily forget about their problems and gain some breathing space. In this
respect, face-to-face interaction can be a greater means of refreshing their
minds than just talking to others through e-mail or phone calls. According to a
study conducted by Harvard University, two thirds of the surveyed respondents
answered that they were strongly helped by face-to-face communication when they
have some problems in their lives. They also responded that if it had not been
for, they could have failed to cope with the problems.
Taking all of
these reasons into consideration, we should agree with the idea since people
can more deeply and effectively interact with others with face-to-face
communication. Needless to say, there is no doubt in my opinion that it is
better than other types of communication.
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Though the
intense argument is possible on the topic, I strongly agree with the statement
that face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication. Of
course, there are some advantages of these types of communication such as
convenience and a prompt response. However, I think that there are things
that people can more benefit from face-to-face interaction. This is because
interaction through face-to-face can more enhance our social skills and gives
us emotional relief than other types such as letters, e-mail, or telephone. The
two ideas stated below can be convincing evidence to support my view.
Most importantly, face-to-face communication more
enhances our social interaction than other types do such as paper types or phone
call. More and more
businesses require people who are not only specialists in their fields but also
skilled in social interaction. In the rapidly changing environment of
businesses, no task can be done by a single person.(business 디테일 전에 어떻게 social interaction을enhance하는지 표현하세요) Given the need for collaboration, social interaction
and team spirits are necessary qualifications for any successful person.
Clearly, face-to-face communication can provide people to interact with other
people more deeply than other types. This is because it is more effective to
communicate with other people sincerely. By interacting with other people
through face-to-face communication, for instance, people can have a sense of
belonging and unity, both of which are vital in building a closer connection. A
study conducted by a renowned professor indicates that people can improve their
social interaction with other people in a much more effectual way if they
interact with face-to-face. He also goes on to say that it is more difficult
for them to have sincere relationships, if they just interact with other people
through e-mail or phone calls.
In addition, face-to-face communication can provide people to
find emotional relief much more than other types. The reason why it is more
effective for them is that other types of communication often just skim the
surface of the relationships. By communicating with others through
face-to-face, people can share their current thinking with others more
open-heartedly. People nowadays become weary caused by too much stress. Through
the deep interaction with others, they can temporarily forget about their
problems and gain some breathing space. In this respect, face-to-face
interaction can be a greater means of refreshing their minds than just talking
to others through e-mail or phone calls. According to a study conducted by
Harvard University, two thirds of the surveyed respondents answered that they
were strongly helped by face-to-face communication when they have some problems
in their lives. They also responded that if it had not been for, they could
have failed to cope with the problems.
Taking all of these reasons into consideration, we should agree
with the idea since people can more deeply and effectively interact with others
with face-to-face communication. Needless to say, there is no doubt in my opinion
that it is better than other types of communication.
Writing 0-30 Score
Scale
Good (24-30)
Overall Comment: 표현력이 우수합니다. 각 아이디어나 포인트를 이해하기 쉽게 잘 설명했습니다. 서론에는
도입 후 바로 글쓴이의 입장을 표현하세요. 불필요한 디테일이 많습니다.
본론의 첫 번째 문단에서는 business 가 요즘 필요한 기술들 설명하기 전에 어떻게 face-to face communication이 social skills를
enhance하는 지 설명하세요.