■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Actual 07 bonobos |
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▶ Your Answer :
In
the reading passage, in spite of physical similarities between bonobos and chimpanzees,
bonobos show more gentle behavior. However, the lecturer argues that the
assertion is misguided. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s arguments.
First,
the lecturer insists that wild bonobos in Congo are actually aggressive. This
proved some researcher who visited bonobos’ habitats observed that some people were
threatened by bonobos when approached. Also, bonobos attacked each other and made
wound. This rebuffs the reading passage’s point that bonobos showed
unaggressive behavior when they were captured.
Second,
the lecturer maintains that the reason why adult bonobos do not attack young
bonobos is not because they are gentle but because young bonobos company with
their parents. The present of parents deters others from attacking young adult.
In contrast, young chimpanzees without parents are susceptible to be attacked.
This refutes the reading passage’s claim that bonobos are meek because adult
bonobos do not attack young bonobos counter to chimpanzee.
Finally,
the lecturer asserts that bonobos’ herbivorous eating habits are related to the
supply of food. Chimpanzee started to intake meet because of food shortage by
humans’ intrusion at chimpanzees’ habitats. Bonobos would eat the meet If they
placed the same condition. This counters the reading passage’s argument that
bonobo are docile because they mainly eat vegetable in opposition to chimpanzee
which consume meet.
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In the reading passage, in spite of
physical similarities between bonobos and chimpanzees, bonobos show more gentle
behavior. However, the lecturer argues that the assertion is misguided. This
casts doubt on the reading passage’s arguments.
First, the lecturer insists that wild
bonobos in Congo are actually aggressive. This (is) proved (by) some researcher who visited bonobos’ habitats
observed that some people were threatened by bonobos when approached. Also,
bonobos attacked each other and made (more) wounded. This rebuffs the reading passage’s point
that bonobos showed unaggressive behavior when they were captured.
Second, the lecturer maintains that
the reason why adult bonobos do not attack young bonobos is not because they
are gentle but because young bonobos company with their parents. The present of
parents deters others from attacking young adult. In contrast, young
chimpanzees without parents are susceptible to be attacked. This refutes the
reading passage’s claim that bonobos are meek because adult bonobos do not
attack young bonobos counter to (the)
chimpanzee.
Finally, the lecturer asserts that
bonobos’ herbivorous eating habits are related to the supply of food.
Chimpanzee started to intake meat because of food shortage by humans’ intrusion
at chimpanzees’ habitats. Bonobos would eat the meet if they
placed the same condition. This counters the reading passage’s argument
that bonobo are docile because they mainly eat vegetable in opposition to
chimpanzee which consume meet.
Writing 0-30 Score Scale
Good (24-30)
Overall Comment: 토플 통합형 형식 맞게 Lecturer 와 reading
passage 의 핵심 포인트들을 잘 비교했습니다. 그러나 사소한 문법 오류가 많습니다. 표현하기 힘들면 Lecturer의 표현들을 그대로 사용하세요. 글 쓴 후 문법 오류들을 꼭 검토해주시길 바랍니다.