■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
In
the reading passage, it would be difficult for people to live on Venus because
of several problems. However, the lecturer insists that it is possible to solve
the problems. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s point.
First,
the lecturer argues that high air pressure on Venus can be managed by some structures.
If people build space station at higher altitude far from the Venus’ surface,
the pressure becomes the same between the Earth and Venus. It leads to avoiding
crushing manmade structures. This is a solution of writer’s claim that the high
air pressure deters people from living on Venus.
Second,
the speaker insists that water or oxygen can be created by chemical reaction. By
using chemical compound, oxygen can be isolated and water can be made on Venus,
This address reading passage’s concern that living on Venus are implausible due
to no water and oxygen.
Finally,
the lecturer maintains that there is an alternative about problems of energy
production. The gas layer on Venus is not severe than people expected. People
can earn some energy from solar panels which are installed on space craft.
Also, considering slow orbit of Venus, people can contact sunlight at much
longer time. This is reaction of the reading passage’s claim that people cannot
make any energy because of the thick of gas layer.
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In the reading passage, it would be
difficult for people to live on Venus because of several problems. However, the
lecturer insists that it is possible to solve the problems. This casts doubt on
the reading passage’s point.
First, the lecturer argues that high
air pressure on Venus can be managed by some structures. If people build space
station at higher altitude far from the Venus’ surface, the pressure becomes the
same between the Earth and Venus. It leads to avoiding(would avoid) crushing manmade structures. This is a solution of writer’s claim
that the high air pressure deters people from living on Venus.
Second, the speaker insists that
water or oxygen can be created by chemical reaction. By using chemical
compound, oxygen can be isolated and water can be made on Venus, This address
reading passage’s concern that living on Venus are implausible due to no water
and oxygen.
Finally, the lecturer maintains that
there is an alternative about problems of energy production. The gas layer on
Venus is not (as) severe than (as) people
expected. People can earn some energy from solar panels which are installed on
space craft. Also, considering slow orbit of Venus, people can contact sunlight
at (a) much longer time. This is reaction of(contradicts) the reading passage’s claim that people cannot make any
energy because of the thick of gas layer.
Writing 0-30 Score Scale
Good (24-30)
Overall Comment: 주제들을 잘 파악했고 글의 주제들을 잘 설명했습니다. Lecturer의 포인트들을 이해하기 쉽게 글을 잘 구성했습니다. 그러나, 사소한 문법 오류가 많습니다. 글 쓴 후 꼭 검토해주시길 바랍니다. 특히 동사가 맞는지 확인해주시고 관사가 필요할 때 없는 경우가 많습니다. Reading passage를 언급할 때 (reaction to)표현으로 시작해서 언급하지 마세요. (This contradict, this counters, this casts doubt)