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The lecture against the wolf theory which claims that dogs origins from wolves.
For the first, it is
because of their different hunting style which makes theory no sense at all.
Ancient people used traps
Also, because wolves get more and more aggressive as they grow, it is very impossible to train them.
And there is also
scientific proof as well. Scientists(대문자)
found out the foot prints of young boy and dog which is from much earlier
Scientist also discovered
that there are multiple ancient dog kinds, which proves dogs did not
Grade : Fair (18-23)
Overall Comment : 주장을 뒷받침하는 내용이 부족하고 문법적 오류가 발견되었습니다. 또한 주장들이 명확하게 구분되어 지지 않고 핵심 내용이 정확히 표현되지 않고 있습니다.
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