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In the lecture, the speaker contends that the claim suggested in the reading is groundless. This casts doubt on reading passage's assertion that genetically modified (GM) crops are good for humans.
To begin with, the lecturer asserts that
GM crops cannot help resolve problem of world hunger. She points
out that the world
In addition, the speaker maintains that GM crops can't enable humans to reduce the price of food. To be specific, GM crops companies had to spend a lot of money producing GM crops, so they are expecting profits. Likewise, raising GM crops requires more water than conventional ones. For these reasons, GM crops would be more costly than conventional ones. This is in direct opposition to the reading passage's argument that GM crops are beneficial for reducing the price of food.
Lastly, the lecturer points that storing and
transporting vaccines made by GM crops is difficult like conventional
ones. She supports her idea by saying that vaccines made by
GM crops consisted of fruits, such as banana and
tomato, that would be easily spoiled. What this means is
that vaccines made by GM crops have to be continuously cooled, which
make
Grade : Good (24-30)
Overall Comment : 내용과 주장이 명확히 잘 전달되었으나 스펠링 오류와 몇몇 어색한 문장들이 있습니다. 또한 GM crops라는 표현이 반복적으로 사용되었으니 this나 it으로 받아주어서 같은 표현을 자제하는 것이 좋습니다.
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