▶ Your Answer : The lecturer argues that the causes of whales being stranded on the beach aren’t are not obvious. This contradicts the reading passage’s claim that there are a few possible reasons about this phenomenon. First, the lecturer argues that it isn’t is not accurate to explain these stranding for wind patterns. Actually, the stranding of whales happened all around the world, including with diverse wind patterns. For example, in the western coast (어디의 서해안?), the wind flows away from the land. This counters the reading passage’s claim that wind patterns cause the flow of food sources, leading to whales stranding. Second, the lecturer claims that illness doesn’t does not explain the reason completely. It isn’t is not enough to explain why healthy whales suddenly become sick. In addition, whales can swim back well by themselves when they return to water. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that whales helplessly lie on the beach because of diseases. Last, the lecturer points out that the problem of sonar beams doesn’t does not explain all kinds of whales stranding. Every whale uses same method of navigating, but some whales are stranded while others do not. Also, it isn’t is not a case that whales which frequently go to shallow beach become stranded. This refutes the reading passage’s claim that shallow coastlines disturb whales navigating. Writing 0-30 scale Good(27-30) 전반적으로 reading passage와 listening passage의 주장을 잘 정리하고 요약하였습니다. TOEFL 글쓰기는 academic writing skill을 평가하는 시험입니다. 따라서 축약형 등 비격식체와 구어체를 피하고 정확한 영어를 사용해야 합니다. 그밖에는 문법 면에서 흠 잡을 데가 크게 없는 글입니다. |