▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample support for the claim that GM Foods
are beneficial, However the professor of the lecture gives several reasons as
rebuttal to the author’s point.
First, the professor contends that World starvation problem can not be
solved by GM foods. Actual cause of is not quantity of produced food, but
uneven distribution. So, for all even though GM foods increase the yields
of foods, unequal world hunger will continue. because food distribution matter
is not handled. this casts doubt on the reading passage’s suggestion that GM Foods can overcome world hunger by
producing more food.
Next, the professor insists that GM Foods cannot decrease the food cost. Because GM food making organisms expect
어색합니다. profit and they will impose large expenses to buyer. on top of that, GM
foods need more water than conventional food and its seed are expensive. so it
makes GM food’s price higher. this
counters the reading passage’s claim that GM Food can
lower the food’s cost by stabilizing food supply.
Finally, the professor argue that GM food can’t increase vaccine’s
availability. For not to In order not to be decomposed, GM fruit in vaccine like banana and tomato
need cooling continuously continuous cooling during transportation. this refutes the reading passage’s assertion that GM foods can make vaccines available in
more wide country. because they have highly resistant to temperature.
Writing 0-30 Score
Scale
Good (24-30)
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