▶ Your Answer : The recent topic of whether people cannot it is to be successful in a group project without accepting criticism is intriguing. Although some people think that accepting criticism is not necessary, I strongly contend content that accepting criticism is very important for success in a group for the following reasons.
Most importntly, peole can enhance their insight for fluent activity in a group by accepting criticism. While growing up, people are immersed by certain types of information and knowledge about this world through formalized education. The problem with this is that most of the information and knowledge is conveyed with source's viewpoint and they can easily become biased without having any chances to broaden their horizon. As a result, they can have some prejudice in group project, and they will not fail to solve their problem. Therefore, in order to gain various views and succeed in a group project, they should be encouraged to talk about project with their co-workers. According to a reknownded professor Mr. Kim, it is evident that people can attain their goal of success in a group project in an a effectual way when they have chance of various others' insistence. contending. He also goes on to say that it is very difficult difficulty for people who do not like accepting other people's thinking when they do group project to achieve their aim. Likewise, his statement proves that my argument is convincing. 내가 제시한 '시야를 넓히는 것'과는 관련이 없는 사례입니다. 사례 내용을 더 구체화해주세요.
Secondly, good relationship with co-workers is necessary for success in group project. Admittedly, more and more businesses require people who are not only specialests in their field but also skilled in social interaction. In the rapidly changing environment of science and economy, no tasks can be done by a single person. Given the need for collaboration, social skills and team spirits are necessary qualification for any successful person. Consequently, accepting other people's opinion and contending the material for project provide people with the perfect settings to practice social skills. By 쉼표삭제 serious brain storming with co-workers about the project and having many chances to talk about each other people can develop a sense of belonging and unity, both of which prove to be vital in building a better success. My personal experience can be used to prove this point. When I was a freshman, I had a team project to investigate social problem about of internet games. There were many different opinions about this problem such as advantage and disadvantage. At that time we had many chances for brain storming and talking about the problems every day for seven days. As a result, we could have objective decision and get good grade. off-topic. 그룹프로젝트에서 좋은 관계가 중요한 이유를 설명하는 것은 논점에 맞지 않습니다. '다른 사람의 비판을 받아들일 줄 아는 것'이 그룹프로젝트 성공에 갖는 영향을 설명해야 합니다.
Taking all of these reasons into consideration, we should agree with the idea that accepting criticism is important for success in group project since it is important for enhancing insight and developing relationship with other people. Writing 0–30 score scale Limited - Fair (15-18) 외워둔 모델에세이에서 키워드만 바꾸는 활용법은 off-topic의 글을 만들기 쉽습니다. 논제 흐름에 맞게 내용이 전개되고 있는지, 답안이 논제에 대한 답안이 될 수 있는 내용인지를 계속해서 점검해야 합니다. body2의 경우 다른 사람들의 비판을 받아들이는 것이 팀원들간의 관계를 좋게 만들어서 결과도 좋아진다는 식의 흐름은 가능하지만 '좋은 관계가 좋은 결과를 낸다'라고만 응축시킬 경우 off-topic의 답안이 됩니다. 모델에세이를 활용할 때 논제에 맞는 방향으로 설명을 풀어나갈 수 있게끔 하는 부분을 집중적으로 연습해주시면 될 것 같아요. 수고 많으셨습니다. ^^ |