▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that they should only read books
that have an educational purpose. However, in my
opinion, people should read various books without one-side's topic. This is
because only to read reading educational books will make readers have a distance from those
volumes (What does it mean?) because of it is boring
and to read reading books in various fields will give readers more creative thinking and wider idea in their life. First, people who only have contacted with educational paper will not be
interested in reading books. (Make
the meaning clear) They are likely
to lose interest and curiousness when they read books that mostly deal with
academic subjects including unfamiliar and difficult explanation. For example,
when I was an elementary student, it was boom for parents
to make their child to pre-read science books during vacation before starting
next semester. However, almost friends felt bored to read academic books
and then they could not concentrate on science class any more in next
term. Eventually it made their science record fall because of losing interest. Second, to read reading various books narrating about any field gives them students possibilities to make creative thinking and wide idea.
When people reading books including wide topics, people can combine two
fields and make surprising results based on this collaboration. For
example, Steve jobs who was ex-a
former president of Apple Company could create a cutting edge design laptop and cell phone
because he learned a lot through
reading and read books related with calligraphy
unrelated with educational objective when he was in college. He could join
this with use his information of technology learned from books in various fields to make creative devices later. If he had
concentrated on only engineering and computer technology at that time, he would
have not made ingenious items like Macintosh and i-phone. To sum up, reading books having including many different several topics
gives readers more interest about those and make people to be creative to think unique
idea. In this regard, I believe that people should read not only educational
books but also books including wide subjects and theme.
채점기준표
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Grammar
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Contents
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Example
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Coherence
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점수
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2
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3
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2
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3
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Score
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Limited 17-19
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다소
unclear한 문장구조가 많은 편이에요. 예를 들면
have a distance from volume이나, combine two fields and make surprising result와 같이 앞뒤정황을 반드시 설명해주신 후에 이야기를 전개해주셔야 합니다. 또한 첫번째
logic은 보다
simple하게
many kinds of books inspires students more than educational books로 가는 것이 좋습니다.
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