▶ Your Answer : In the lecture, the
lecturer claims that the reading's assertion is groundless. This casts doubt on
the reading's claim that a manned mission to Mars has several problems. First, the lecturer
argues that a problem about dust can be solved by sound technology. To be
specific, dust particles that cause interference with the machinery can be
blown away by sound wave. This contrasts the reading's argument that a manned mission to Mars is hard
because Mars is covered in dust. Second, the lecturer
maintains that the psychological impact of astronauts is manageable. This is because astronauts already
prepare the problem
<- how? and
receive enough trainings. Also, counseling for them is available for them
and they can bring a recorded video of their family and friends if they
want. This refutes the reading's insistence that the lengthy trip to Mars
is a psychological obstacle to overcome. Lastly, the lecturer
insists that the financial burden of a manned Mars expedition can be prevented.
To explain, governments of several countries can cover the expense through
international cooperations -> cooperation 은 uncountable 합니다. Besides, a manned
mission to Mars has many disadvantage, <-? Advantages 말하는건가요? so it is worthwhile to be
invested for the far future. –
minor point 입니다.
This rebuffs
the reading's point that a manned Mars expedition would be quite difficult for
a country due to the financial burden. Writing 0-30 Score
Scale Good (24-30)
Overall Comment : 전체적으로 Points 와 요약 잘 하셨습니다. 문법 실수 나 wording 실수 주의 해주세요. Body 3 내용에서는 미래 얘기보다, financial 관련된 listening
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