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The
reading passage contends that the extinction of the dodo was
First
of all, the lecturer points out that non-native animals which
Moreover,
in the lecturer, the point is made that the fact
The final point made by lecturer is that the dodo’s habitat was not completely destroyed by the new settlers’ agricultural activities. This is obvious that the dodos still had resources that they needed to live. This is different from the passage’s view that agricultural activities of the Dutch colonists entirely ruined the dodos’ habitat.
Grade : Good (24-30)
Overall Comment : 수동/능동태의 사용과 정관사/부정관사의 사용에 대해 주의하신다면 충분히 높은 점수를 기대할 수 있습니다. 사람 앞에는 the를 잘 쓰지 않습니다.
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