▶ Your Answer :
In the given set of
information, both the reading and the lecture deal with the usage of plastic bags. The lecturer casts doubt on the
reading passage's claim on environmental movements to ban local
stores to sell plastic bags, by providing three
counterarguments. First, the reading passage
claims that paper bags which have harmful drawback such as environmental
problems, will be used as an alternative of using plastic bags.
However, the lecturer argues that this claim is disputable. This is because
paper bags are easily torn and soaked by rain, which makes it difficult to
use permanently. Instead, bags made of cloths which are helpful to
the environment, will be used. Next, according to
the reading passage, plastic bags will be recognized as they
can be easily recycled in to a new bag or other plastic goods.
However, the lecturer contends that this claim is arguable. To
be specific, plastic bags are difficult to be recycled as they easily stop the opperation of machines. <- Why and how? Thus, recycing plastic bags would decrease as companies
will no longer accept recycling them. Lastly, the lecturer disagrees
on the point made in the reading passage that other areas will continuely use
plastic bags despite the bans in local stores. She argues that instead of
using plastic bags, people will seek for cloth bags as they are more convinient
and easily portable. Writing 0-30 Score
Scale Fair (17-23) Overall Comment: Flow 가 끊겨요. 조금 더 매끄럽게 글을 쓸 수
있을거 같아요. Body 2 에서는 why and how is it
easy to stop the operation of machines 하나요? Spelling 실수도
확인해주세요.
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