■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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The lecture argues
that the ashen light of Venus is still a mystery to us. This contradicts the
claim made in the lecture that there are possible sources of the ashen light. First, the lecturer
explains that the chemical process theory is impossible. To be specific, light
emitted when carbon monoxide and oxygen is very faint. To observe it, people would need a strong telescope, but early
astronomers used simple, and weak telescopes and saw the ashen light. <- 요약 해주세요. Ex) and observing it would have required a strong telescope which
was not present at that time. This casts doubt on the claim mentioned in the reading passage that the
chemical process creates the ashen light of Venus. Second, the
lecturer talks about the sunlight reflecting off the clouds in the atmosphere,
and says that this is highly unlikely. The ashen light of Venus occurs
rarely, even though the Sun is always shining on Venus. The ashen light should
have occurred a lot more if the Sun was source of the light. This counters the
claim made in the reading passage that the reflection of the Sun’s light is the reason of the ashen
light of Venus. Third, the lecturer
says that the aurorae theory isn’t true. Usually, a planet needs a magnet field in order to pull in
the Sun’s plasma, and create an aurora. But the
thing is, Venus does not have a magnetic field, making it unable to
generate and aurora. This refutes the claim made in the reading passage
that the ashen light of Venus is actually the aurorae occurring on Venus. Writing 0-30 Score
Scale Good (24-30)
Overall Comment: 전체적으로 flow 좋아요. 글자수 신경 써주세요. Body 첫 문장 들 나중에 reading 내용과 겹치네요. 생략해도 좋습니다. Points 잘 잡으셨으니, 225자 이내로 요약하는 연습 해주세요~ |