■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : it is better to have friends who are similar to you than those who are different from you. |
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▶ Your Answer :Some people think that it is better to have friends who are similar to you than those who are different from you. However, in my opinion, I think that making analogous friends is not good. This is because friends who are different from self provide people with opportunities to experience various perspective and it can give them more pleasure rather than similar friends.
To begin with, friends who are different from self provide people with opportunities to experience various perspective. To be specific, usually, a majority of people make a similar friends. This is because they do not need to fight with their friends due to difference of perspective. However, it makes people not grow up through understanding about each other. There is a good example in this situation. For example, until I was in middle school, I always wanted to make a friend who had similar value because I hated to fight with my friends. Inevitably, I could not learn fact that when living with some people who are different from me, I should understanding them. Eventually, when I was in high school, I was in trouble that many students disliked me. because I always experienced similar people, it is hard for me to understand a different personality’s person. If I had make friends who were different from me, I did not need to be in the trouble.
On top of that, making different personalities’ friends can give people more pleasure rather than similar friends. This is because, analogous people usually have same or similar hobby. So, if they have friends who are similar to them, they always play same activities. However, hanging out with different personality people gives them many chances to do various activities. For example, before I was in high school, I always played online game with my similar personalities’ friends. This is because they did not want to go out. In addition, we gained high weight. However, after I enrolled in high school, I made many friends who have hobby that like to play outdoor activities. To hanging out with them, I spent a lot of time playing outdoor activities such as basket ball, base ball. And it gave me pleasure of new type and I could have good body shape. If I did not make new type of friends, I could not attain these things.
To sum up, friends of different type give people with opportunities to experience various perspective and it can give them more pleasure rather than similar friends. For these reasons, I think that making analogous friends is not good
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Some people think that it
is better to have friends who are similar to you than those who are different
from you. However, in my opinion, I think that making analogous friends is not
good. This is because friends who are different from (one)self provide people with
opportunities to experience various perspective and it can give them more
pleasure rather than (that of) similar friends.
To begin with, friends who are different from self
provide people with opportunities to experience various perspectives. To be specific,
usually, a majority of people make a similar friends. This is because
they do not need to fight with their friends due to difference of perspective.
However, it makes people not grow up through understanding about each other.
There is a good example in this situation. For example, until I was in middle
school, I always wanted to make a friend who had similar value because I hated
to fight with my friends. Inevitably, I could not learn fact that when living
with some people who are different from me, I should understanding them.
Eventually, when I was in high school, I was in trouble that many students
disliked me. because I always experienced similar people, it is hard for me to
understand a different personality’s person(person’s
personality). If I had make friends who were different from me, I did not
need to be in the trouble.
On top of that, making different personalities’ friends
can give people more pleasure rather than similar friends. This is because,
analogous people usually have same or similar hobby. So, if they have friends
who are similar to them, they always play same activities. However, hanging out
with different personality people gives them many chances to do various
activities. For example, before I was in high school, I always played online
game with my similar personalities’ friends. This is
because they did not want to go out. In addition, we gained high weight.
However, after I enrolled in high school, I made many friends who have hobby that
like to play (related) outdoor activities. To hanging out
with them, I spent a lot of time playing outdoor activities such as basketball,
baseball. And it gave me pleasure of new type and I could have good body
shape. If I did not make new type of friends, I could not attain these
things.
To sum up, friends of different type give people
with opportunities to experience various perspectives and it can give them more
pleasure rather than similar friends. For these reasons, I think that making
analogous friends is not good
Writing 0-30 Score Scale
Fair (17-23)
Overall Comment: 예시를 다양하게 선택하세요. 자기 경험, 연구, 자료, 등 다양하게 선택해서 의견을 뒷받침 하세요. 본론의 2번째 문단에 weight대한 디테일을 생략하고 다른 취미를 찾아서
받은 pleasure,happiness에 집중하세요. 문법
오류가 많습니다. 특히, 동사와 명사가 안 맞는 경우가 많습니다. 주의하세요.