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Some people may think that the news media provides unbiased information
with reliable sources. However, I think that the news media doesn't offer
us credible source of neutral information. This is because each writer
or reporter (reporter is a journalist who
writes, researches or reports on information, and/or conduct interview and
so on. You can refer to https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Journalist)
of the news media reflects his/her own
point of view (I think what you mean is
more like this) provides their own opinions while informing
the news, and
also to increase ratings of the news he/she they tends to
exaggerate the facts inform news with
exaggeration. Well-done!
To
begin with, writers and reporters of news journalists
have has their own perspectives and
tend to reflect it them on the news. During
the process while (Make it concise if possible!) trying to announce
deliver the specific
information specifically, they usually inevitably (if you understand the meaning of the word “inevitably”
correctly, you might not be able to use it with “usually” because its
meaning contradicts the meaning of “usually,” in a sense that “inevitably”
modifies something that can’t be avoided happening and so happening all the
time while “usually” modifies something that happens most of the time but
not always. So pick one between the two adverbs.) reflect their own
perspectives on the news, since it is very hard for everyone people to avoid their his/her own viewpoints when even when writing essays, and doing informative writings. Hence, many
people recommend others and also try to access as many much and diverse news media on the same affairs as possible, since they know each news medium
takes different positions on the same affairs. For example, Josun
Newspaper, one of the most famous newspapers in Korea, tends to reflect its write their articlesat conservative
perspectives on the paper. In
contrast, Donga Newspaper which is also one of the another most popular newspapers in Korea called Donga Newspaper, tends to write articles
with radical views. By this, most citizens in Korea usually read those two
or more newspapers to keep neutral terms on the matters, if they have spare
to read them all.
On
top of that, to increase ratings, which lead to
higher profits, news media have a tendency to more often than not write articles with biased
viewpoints. In an attempt to provideing articles that can attract people and
gain popularity, News meida (Do not
repeat the same name) they tend
to struggle for manipulate the story in a
particular way. , since it leads to higher
profits. The more higer ratings they get, the more profit they would
earn, such as from increased advertising fees, enlarged investments on
them. For example, recently, in Korea, even some news
media which have extreme perpectives perspectives
on politics and diplomatic relations has began to emerge. They try
to announce the news on one-sided terms so that those who have similar perspective like it. leading
people to share and get similar perspectives like them. They were aiming for more popularity and profit from
doing so. Through these trials, they has tried to get popularity
among people and gain much profits from it. <-
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your paragraph is way too short, you may consider delete it or combine it
with the previous paragraph in a proper way.) Additionally, more and more news media has have emerged or changed their
styles following these trends for gaining profits.
To
sum up, writers or reporters of the news media have a tendency to journalists are prone to infuse put their
own viewpoints on into writing the news, (an independent sentence+ comma+ another independent
sentence) and news media is are
inclined to inform news to people with bias to increase ratings. For
these reasons, I disagree with the statement that the news media is a
reliable source of unbiased information.
You can do it. Keep working hard. All the best. J
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