as our society has been changed more and more, people's lifes have also been changed very much. there are many factors that affect it. among them, I think there are two main factors that affect the change of people's life. one is developing of medical technology, the other is our affluent society.
first of all, our advanced modern medical technology contributes to a today's people's longer life. our modern medical technology that cannot compare with the ancient medical technology which relied on the religious cults and superstitions has been improved and developed very much, resulting in increasing people's life span today. for instance, the cancer known as a incurable disease and people couldn't cure in the ancient time can cure today with our advanced modern technology, so that a person who infected the cancer can revive now.
furthermore, our affluent society also contributed people's longer life.
as our society is becoming more and more affluent, the society pay more attention to a warfare, so that the number of people who live longer have increased. for example, the government support some people old or can't thrown away for themselves as much as it possible. so nobody suffers starvation and homlessness, resulting in living longer under such a comfortable circumstance.
to sum up, there are two main factors that contribute to a people's longer life span. one is advanced modern medical technology, the other is our affluent society that makes us to live affluently. as our society keeps being developed more and more, people also will be able to live much longer than now.
■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
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as our society has been changed more and more, people's lifes have also been changed very much. there are many factors that affect it. among them, I think there are two main factors that affect the change of people's life. one is developing of medical technology, the other is our affluent society.
first of all, our advanced modern medical technology contributes to a today's people's longer life. our modern medical technology that cannot compare with the ancient medical technology which relied on the religious cults and superstitions has been improved and developed very much, resulting in increasing people's life span today. for instance, the cancer known as a incurable disease and people couldn't cure in the ancient time can cure today with our advanced modern technology, so that a person who infected the cancer can revive now.
furthermore, our affluent society also contributed people's longer life.
as our society is becoming more and more affluent, the society pay more attention to a warfare, so that the number of people who live longer have increased. for example, the government support some people old or can't thrown away for themselves as much as it possible. so nobody suffers starvation and homlessness, resulting in living longer under such a comfortable circumstance.
to sum up, there are two main factors that contribute to a people's longer life span. one is advanced modern medical technology, the other is our affluent society that makes us to live affluently. as our society keeps being developed more and more, people also will be able to live much longer than now. | |