When people are in trouble, they seek advice from others to find the way to solve the problem. Some people might ask friends of an older age for advice, while others get advice from friends in (friends their own age) thier own age. Although it might be more comfortable to talk with friends with the same age friends in one's own age; however, I believe seeking help from people of an older age is better for several reasons. (although하고 however가 충돌해요 똑같은 뜻이니까 하나는 빼주세요:)
To begin with, people in an older age have more experience than friends in my age. This is due to the fact that people in an older age already had adapted to their environment and studied or worked for a longer time. Therefore, they have more experience about the society which they live in. For their life time, they have encountered many problems and also have overcome these plights. These experiences are more valuable than any other advice advices because they have actually gone through them and learned how to deal with them. it is live and real experiences of people. By seeking help from people who are older than me, I can become wise and have an insight into current situation. It would be not easy for friends in my age to give me such wise advice because they are still young and have not had many have a few experiences.
*in an older age =>> of 로 고쳐주세요 :) 색으로 표시한 부분~
On top of that, people who are older than me are is more intelligent and knowledgable than friends around my age are. This is because most people in an older age are professionals in a specific field. As a result, senior citizens are able to offer more discerning and sensible aids =이건 바디1에 관련된 내용(지혜) 인것 같구요, "professinal, specific, practical 등으로 쓰면 좋을듯해요:) when people seek help from them. For example, when I was in high school, I had a hard time preparing to prepare for college entrace exam. Often I felt limitation to study on my own with lack of resources and wrong information. However, when I asked asking advice from teacher who was an is expert in college entrace exam, he gave me appropriate help and better guidance about study. I do not think that my friends in my age could have done this for me.
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