■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of the Internet, students can learn more effectively. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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It is debatable that whether the Internet is effective to students. Some people say that the Internet is not good method to study to students because there are too much information, and students do not know which information is true or not. Moreover, they believe that using the Internet is waste of time to students. However, I strongly believe that students can receive help through the Internet because there are much useful information, so students can search information quickly, and students can learn something through online courses.
First of all, students can find some information quickly on the Internet. Students do not need to comb through books because there are much information about everything. Therefore, students can search some information in short time even if they have to search unfamiliar information. For example, I took a electives about music last semester, and I got an assignment about history of jazz. Jazz was unfamiliar field to me, and I had to search the information on the Internet. After all, I could find all information about jazz in short time and wrote a report well.
Moreover, online courses help students who do not have chance to study something. There are various online courses on the Internet, and students can choose what they want to study. According to some statistics, students who take online courses on the Internet are increasing because they can study what they want to learn, and they do not need to worry about time and places. It is good opportunity to students who have difficult situation to study. One of my friends have taken online courses about English. She is very satisfied with the online courses because she is not afford to study English at English institute, and she could study English at home and save money.
To sum up, using the Internet to learn something is effective to students because they can search some information that they want to know in short time, and there are much information on the Internet. Also, students who do not chance to study can use online courses easily on the Internet. Therefore, they can have equality to study something. For these reasons, I strongly believe that the Internet is very useful to students.
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