In my opinion, it depends on what stage of our life WE ARE AT. If I were at THE beginning of my career I would prefer to have longER hours OF work rather than shorter hours.
At the beginning OF our careerS, even though we have loaded WITH knowledge from school, we DO NOT have experience in practice what we have learned in our academic LIVES. Therefore, we should work longer hours, practicing what we have learned to acquire more experiences in our field.
By gaining more experience we would be able to advance in our career and get a better pay rate.
THE SAME as everyone, we wish to be able to afford a good house in a good neighborhood, TO BE ABLE TO GO out to good restaurantS and to be able to travel to other places in our vacation. So, we have to work hard FROM the beginning of our career and save our money to better enjoy our life IN the near future.
On the other hand, after I have reached a certain position in my career, even IF I WERE TO get A lower pay rate, I would prefer to work shorter hours.
Therefore, at the beginning of our careerS we should make a massive effort to work longer hours as much as possible(,) to gain experience in our field and SAVE money. After I have reached a certain position in my career, I would prefer to spend more time with my family and my friends,) even if it would mean less money IN my pay-check.
After havING worked for a certain time in our careerS, we would have our financial situation pretty much under our control(,) and we will be looking for a better quality of life with less stress. So, at this point, I would prefer to spend more quality of time with my family and friends rather than working SUCH long hours.
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