Most students get an education in their school. They usually acquire diverse knowledge and get many experiences in school. However, there is something they cannot be experience in a school. And some people think school have purpose for students to stress importance of study, I disagree with the following statement that more than 11 months of class in a school year can give students a better and more effective education.
To begin with, students cannot get more diverse experience outside except for long vacation. What students usually learn in school is limited in their subjects like social, science, and math and so on. But if they stay in their school for a long time, even though they can acquire those subjects in detail, but they would know how to use those subjects practically. I think the purpose to learn diverse subjects is to utilize them in routine life. When I was elementary school student, I could learn more by using knowledge which being acquired in my school when I went to a museum during my summer vacation. Thanks to the long summer vacation, I could learn not only what I couldn’t acquire in my school but also how to utilize what I learned in school.
Besides, students would get more stress if they stay long. Most school wants all students to enter a good university. They usually inclined to consider study related to going a renowned university. The phenomenon forces to students stay in their school and it often triggers to get a lot of stress. It obviously contrasts of the following statement that more than 11 months of class in a school year can give students a better and more effective education. It would cause side effect for students such as not studying or sleeping in a school. In case of students in South Korea, they usually study in school without vacation, but their grade is similar to the students who usually have appropriate period of vacation in other nations.
To conclude, I disagree with the following statement that more than 11 months of class in a school year can give students a better and more effective education due to lack of variety experiences in a school and motivation to get more stress for students. I hope especially young students to have many experiences through long vacation and through using those experiences, they could learn something in detail and happily. |