■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :The best way to learn about life is by listening to the advice of friends and family. | |
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It is often said that people learn about life the most by asking for advice to close acquaintance such as friends and family. Some people maybe opposed to this idea because experience also teaches them a lot of life lessons through stimulating motive and five senses. However, from my point of view, advice from companions and family members is the most effective way of learning about lives. This is not only because they can give you practical advice but also people cannot experience all aspects of life on their own.
One reason why advice from close people is the best way to learn about life is that they are able to offer you useful advice. This is due largely in part to the fact that they are the people who know you better than anyone else that exist. In addition, they have similar experiences with me. To take an example, when I was in high school, I had difficulty choosing my major for university. Since there were many subjects that I was interested in, I had to consider my interest and possible career path to decide my major. Unfortunately, I was not mature enough to know what I truely cared for and can do. However, thankfully, my mother had a similar experience with me when she was in my age and helped me settle on the decision. It was very helpful because she knew my interest very well and compeletly understood me.
Furthermore, every people go through different experiences. Life is one time experience. People cannot experience more than one aspect of life at once. Yet, they are aware of different aspects of life as well because they hear from others' experiences. For example, my grandmother as a role model gave me many advice. Whenever I had bad things going on, my grandmother always told me about her experiences in a similar circumstance and then I could see my problem from different angle. When I had problem with my boy friend, who had to serve in military in three months, my grandmother told me about her boyfriend who had to attend a war in the past. I did not know whether I should break up with him or not since I was afraid of sending my boyfriend to somewhere dangerous. However, after listening to her, I changed my mind and realized that serving in the army is scary but for noble reasons.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the best way of learning about life is by gaining advice from friends and family. This is mainly because they know you very well and people cannot attain experences of every aspects by themselves. On the whole, humanbeing is a social creature. They learn from each other and have developed in this way. Thus, I firmly believe that it will have greatest effect when it is done with people who they love and care for. | |
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