Some people say that people are so busy that they do only a few things well. However I disagree with such a view for the following reason. Of course, these days, although many people are so busy because of their heavy workload or assignments, I strongly believe that everyone has a main major thing while living a busy life. 둘중에 하나는 빼주세요 ^^ 앞에 내용을 빼고 뒤에 껀 좀 수정이 필요한데요! of course 빼고, they manage to do their work well even though they are very busy.The rationale behind this is that everything is related to other things. Moreover, we can have a broad mind by learning many different things. we can be more efficient by doing many different things together. 뒤에도 이 주장으로 갔으면 좋겠어요. broad mind 를 가질수 있다는 말은 토픽과 살짝 관련이 없는듯해요. 여러가지일을 같이 하면 더 잘할수 있다는 내용을 서포트해야되니까 동시에 여러 일을 하면 더 효율적으로 할수있다고 쓰면 될것 같네요 ^^
First of all, everything is related to other things. In other words, we should learn about many different things and doing others activities. Although It seems to be non-skillful, everything which we learn is related to other subjects. Take my experience as an example. When I was a college student, I major in business administration. However, I also had learned about music because I want to improve my creativity. After learning music, I become creative thinker and used this ability to apply the situation in business class. It was helpful for me to achieve the better academic performance. My experience illustrates, it is clear that learning different things is helpful to achieve their main major.
Second, we can broad our mind by learning different things. In other words, many people should participate in other activities in order to have diverse experience. Although some people do only one thing to be professional person, it is not efficient. According to a study released by Korean Research Center, more than two-third people mentioned that it is more beneficial to experience diverse things rather than do only one thing. This is because diverse experience help people to broad their mind, have creative thinking, and improve their problem-solving skills. In this sense, it is obvious that people can broad their mind by learning different things.
In conclusion, it is not persuasive that people do only a few things well. First, everything is related to other things, so learning different things is helpful to be professional person. Second, by learning different things they can broad their mind. |