■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Parents are the best teachers. | |
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It has been controversial whether parents play the most important role in teaching children. Some people argue that it is the best way for children to be taught from their parents because they have always been closer to their children. However, I strongly agree with the statement that parents are not always the best teachers to their children. This is because these days, parents are so busy that they can not get along with their children and children have friends who affect on them..
Evidently, parents of today can not take care of their children everyday. This is because both parents have to work at office as competitions get severe in modern society. They have had a hard time in supporting their home. Suppose that a child who have parents both working at office. His father usually spend his time working at office due to an excessive number of orders. The child never seen his father before he goes to bed because his father always comes late at home. Furthermore, his mother also works at office. She has in trouble keeping up with both doing work at office and chores at home. His parents want him to be educated at school or private institutes. Therefore, today the number of children who reared by social institute is increasing as the number of parents who both work at office is rising. This points out that it is hard for parents to teach their children next to them all day long. It is more likely for children to be taught but in school not at home.
Obviously, children can obtain lessons from their friend. children get acceptable from their children. This is because children always meet and get along with their friends. Also, they seem to be motivated as seeing their friends behaviors. When I was a elementary school student, many friends have affect on my attitudes. My best friend ,John Thomson, encouraged me to study hard because he always had responsible for his studies and is diligent. On the other hand, as watching one of my friend, Jane who was a bad student, I beared in mind that I should not do such behaviors. Because she was missing classes and hanging out with her boy friend. She always arose many problems in class. From my experience, it is likely for children to have lessons from their friends.
To sum up, children can get lessons from not parents but others like teachers or their friends. This is because parents are busy supporting their home and children likely get an influence from their friends.
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