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It is obvious that teachers should play a role in helping students to get good grades. However, receiving salary according to a students' grades may have negative effect on both teachers and students. This is because it can exaggerate relationship between teachers and students. Exaggerate라고 하는 것보단 선생님들이 더 authoritative 하게 된다거나, 수업시간이 너무 여유가 없다는 식으로 표현했으면 좋겠어요:) Also, teachers' role is for not only to make students get good grades but also to help students build their good characteristic.
First of all, receiving money according to their students' grades can spoil the relationship between teachers and students. When this policy is published, teachers are expected to control over their students in a more rigorous way. Thus, students may be hesitant to meet their teachers and this may exaggerate ruin the relationship between them. For example, from my experience, when I was a senior in high school, I had no chance to talk about my personal problems with my teacher, At that time, even though I really wanted to open my mind to him because I was suffering suffered from my parents' divorce, he would always ask asked me about only university' issue. However, I understood him because I knew he received incentive fund. according to a the number of students who entered to enter major universities, . I believe that this policy interfered with our relationship apparently.
In addition, teachers' role is teachers are in schools not only for their students' good transcripts but also for their good characteristic. Recently, teachers' role is regarded as only helping students to enroll to major universities. However, students are also need needed to learn how to corporate (corporate-기업의 & cooperate-협동) cooperate with others or help poor people in school. Thus, this policy is inappropriate for teachers to play a role in teaching life' lessons for their students. For example, according to a recent article on newspaper, an aggressive student fought with his teacher in school. They (who?) The article said the student's teacher criticized his bad grades and even insulted him in front of towards his classmates everyday. Eventually, one day, the fight broke out due to a problem related to his final exam's transcript This cleary demonstrates that strengthening education that build students' chracteristics is also significantly important.
To sum up, the policy that teacher receive incentive fund according to a students' grades is inappropriate because it may not only spoil relationship between students and teachers but also weaken education that build students' characteristics. |